Wednesday, March 19, 2008
Chap 3:SBT "Sisters will be Brutal"
"I see I am getting nowhere. You sure you want spend a week with me? I forewarn you, all bets are off."
Snapping out of her funk Carter gazed into her sister's eyes,"Fine. Until then- how are the kids? The Jackal,err I mean your loving and adoring husband?"
Avery chuckled,"They are all fine. Why is it you despise him so much?"
"Who Joeprah? Mr I can fix you with my hocus pocus psycho babble?"
"Yes, Joe", her smile blared white, knowing full well she really liked Joe. What Carter didnt like was making admissions.
"Remember when I was working for Kathleen and Judith HeartSong?"
"Yes."
Carter continued, "And I was insistent on living Life on the Edge?"
"Can't wipe it from my brain." blunt and to the point.
"And Mr Fantastic took it upon himself to be my savior?"
"No he didnt Carter"
"Yes he did. In the process of the BS, convincing Andrew that it was all some Mid-Life Journey, sending Andrew on his way ." she paused taking a long sip of her coffee,"And me off into my descent into hell."
Without hesitation, "No Carter you convinced Andrew, you pushed him away all on your own. You, took that road, that descent all on your own. It was," Avery realized her voice had risen, quieting her tone,"YOU. Took that ride into hell. Andrew got out so he wouldn't be dragged into it with you. No, scratch that, BY you-all you."
Carter gathered her purse and her book began to slide out of the booth. Her bare legs rubbing loudly against the cheap vinyl.
Avery exasperated, "So you run again. You, open the door and you didn't like what you heard.
"No, Avery I just find it hard to stomach the crap. Yanno, I have to wonder at times on why, I sit and listen to the Missives from Suburbia and all the hypocrisies that comes with it."
She stood next to booth, leaning in towards Avery,"Your reality, my dear sister is just as effed as mine."
She turned on her heel to leave, about half way down the aisle, Avery's voice chased her,"We still on for Mom's?"
Carter just waved her hand,"Yea whatever."
Snapping out of her funk Carter gazed into her sister's eyes,"Fine. Until then- how are the kids? The Jackal,err I mean your loving and adoring husband?"
Avery chuckled,"They are all fine. Why is it you despise him so much?"
"Who Joeprah? Mr I can fix you with my hocus pocus psycho babble?"
"Yes, Joe", her smile blared white, knowing full well she really liked Joe. What Carter didnt like was making admissions.
"Remember when I was working for Kathleen and Judith HeartSong?"
"Yes."
Carter continued, "And I was insistent on living Life on the Edge?"
"Can't wipe it from my brain." blunt and to the point.
"And Mr Fantastic took it upon himself to be my savior?"
"No he didnt Carter"
"Yes he did. In the process of the BS, convincing Andrew that it was all some Mid-Life Journey, sending Andrew on his way ." she paused taking a long sip of her coffee,"And me off into my descent into hell."
Without hesitation, "No Carter you convinced Andrew, you pushed him away all on your own. You, took that road, that descent all on your own. It was," Avery realized her voice had risen, quieting her tone,"YOU. Took that ride into hell. Andrew got out so he wouldn't be dragged into it with you. No, scratch that, BY you-all you."
Carter gathered her purse and her book began to slide out of the booth. Her bare legs rubbing loudly against the cheap vinyl.
Avery exasperated, "So you run again. You, open the door and you didn't like what you heard.
"No, Avery I just find it hard to stomach the crap. Yanno, I have to wonder at times on why, I sit and listen to the Missives from Suburbia and all the hypocrisies that comes with it."
She stood next to booth, leaning in towards Avery,"Your reality, my dear sister is just as effed as mine."
She turned on her heel to leave, about half way down the aisle, Avery's voice chased her,"We still on for Mom's?"
Carter just waved her hand,"Yea whatever."
Labels: Chapter, It is just a story, SBT, Ultimate Pimpage
posted by Jod{i} at 3/19/2008 09:09:00 AM, | 
7 Comments:
This is brilliant! Like Mad Libs with blogs. BlogLibs?
This is so awesome. I love it :]
hi sweet jod(i),
thanks for the shout out love.
this was so fun! kathleen :)
thanks for the shout out love.
this was so fun! kathleen :)
lol "LIBBLOGS" is awesome !!
Meleah x2:
Awww ty ty ...I would have to differ, I have read yuor writing...and I think you could! as for the libblogs....we could be onto something...Heck I would even give away a painting for the best or most voted one! Hmmmm
BD:
THanks! Nice to see ya!
Heather:
:D
Kathleen:
Welcome Ma'am
Awww ty ty ...I would have to differ, I have read yuor writing...and I think you could! as for the libblogs....we could be onto something...Heck I would even give away a painting for the best or most voted one! Hmmmm
BD:
THanks! Nice to see ya!
Heather:
:D
Kathleen:
Welcome Ma'am
It is wonderful to return and see that some of the brightest gems are still shining.
Loved.